A spanking fetish piece needs to be quite specific in it’s content. You want the buildup to be as satisfying as the spanking itself. It’s not only about domination, it’s about humiliation. Here is a piece I have created for a spanking fetish web site, caught in the middle of the scenario, right as the action begins.
“You little slut. You’re in for quite the spanking. Your ass is going to be red raw, you’ll have welts that won’t let you sit right for days, and I wouldn’t be surprised if you come up with painful blisters all over that perfect soft ass of yours. On my lap. Now!”
She quickly moved to his side, and bend her small frame over his thick legs. He pushed her round ass up slightly so that her bare breasts were dangling over the other side of his thighs. He ran his rough hands over her pleated skirt, moving his palm down her back side and up under the fabric. With a quick flick, her skirt was up and over her back, exposing her white cotton panties. He admired her little back side for a moment before he readied his arm for her first spanking.
With three quick slaps, his palm landed on her backside. She squirmed and wriggled, which was met with additional hard smacks on her naughty bottom. He ran his hand between her legs and could feel a wet patch starting to form on her previously clean underwear.
“Naughty slut. Now it’s time to really feel that ass of yours.”
He grabbed a handful of her white panties and pulled them down in one movement. He looked down and could see the outline of fingers on her cheeks, pink and starting to swell. She started to squirm and wriggle again, to which he responded with one hard slap on her bare ass. This time she cried out, but that didn’t stop her punishment.
Her ass was getting redder by the moment. He could feel the heat coming off the bruises when he ran his open palm over her ass. He was tempted to slip his fingers inside her, but she wasn’t quite suitably punished yet.
He raised his arm in the air, grabbed onto one of her breasts with the other, and came down with several loud spankings. She tried to move forward to soften the blow, but his firm grip on her tits made movement impossible. He was forcing her to take every blow with its full force. She cried out in pain again, but it didn’t make him slow down.
He felt her wetness on his jeans now.
“Keep still, horny slut. You don’t deserve it yet.”
He contemplating getting a paddle to drive his point home, but he decided that he enjoyed the feeling of her hot-to-the-touch butt on his palm. He pulled his arm back yet again and threw it down with enough force to shift her body forward and generate a deafening scream from her lips. His own hand was starting to throb now, in a way that was being mimicked by his own cock.
He pushed her leg away from himself so that her naked pussy was fully exposed to the air. He could smell her arousal.
“You are a VERY naughty girl, my little slut.”
He slid two fingers into her soaked hole, bringing her that much closer to orgasm.